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The Party's Over

The Play Bill falls from my sweaty palm to the floor
September 8, 2001 and I'm still alive; it's a miracle.
Pushing my bifocals back up my nose, I frown.
I can't remember the play at all?

A cell phone rings. I stumble toward the closed doors.
Bending over, I'm approached from the wing and tackled.
My heel slip-rolls on a broken pencil; I'm down.
What did you do you bastard, he bawls.

the curtains part
revealing a pool of blood:
a chord is struck

My arm's wrenched to my back the pain's hard to ignore.
Arms back, I feel cold metal, he puts on shackles
From the outside, there's a shout; a cop's siren sounds;
he lifts and shoves me to the wall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Makama Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Your intrigue is priceless and unique. Staying on the edge of my seat for some few seconds is what this great piece has done to me. Thanks for the share
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Excellent Debbie. Turning this into a mystery! Well you certainly have my attention. Congratulations on your win.
A. Sharma Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:39 AM
Wow Debbie that's a brilliant masterpiece! Congrats on huge win!
Macmillan Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:59 AM
I had no idea what this was about, until I read the comments below. So, this is the introduction to something? It is a good start and captures our attention! Arrested at a play, pool of blood but on the stage... someone who expected to be dead three days before 9/11, who wears bifocals... and he must have done something horrible (or cops THINK he has done something) to be called a bastard by them. Then of course the broken pencil... a writerly thing... what you got up your sleeve?
Gibson Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Great write, Debbie...I am waiting for the sequel. Congratulations.
Mohn Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Love your unconventional take on this Debbie...not sure how i'm tackling part II yet...thanks for the comment on mine as well
Yvonne Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations Debbie on this refreshing approach, very creative indeed, good luck on the next round of this contest.
May Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 6:50 PM
Congrats on your win Debbie....
Jerden Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 4:32 PM
Read your response. I guess you want to write your entries like a serial, all part of a consistent theme, then. That is certainly an original approach. It will be interesting to see how you work in the next set of ingredients for sure.
Jerden Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 4:06 PM
A mystery inside a riddle wrapped in an enigma... I'm clueless. So many ways to interpret this one. Real, or part of the play? Actor or assassin? Congratulations, Debbie!
Guzzi Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 4:21 PM
well I figured Craig wants us to keep going so I had to have plenty of room to GO! Thanks Roy
Kayode Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 2:48 PM
This is nice Debbie,can you just imagine how dangerous tiny pencil can be! Congrats.
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 1:26 PM
very descriptive write Debbie many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2014 at 4:14 PM
wow, Debs, very descriptively put! the party is indeed over!!!
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 20, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Plays we like can be lots of fun, Debbie .enjoyed yours! ;) Hugs! xxx D.
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