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The Paper Birch (Trochiac Petrameter)

The Paper Birch The peeling bark glows pure as snow Like hearts content in love they know Tho layers fall and rust appears Eternal joy doth vanquish fears When lightning strikes and clouds rain hail The forest floor draws close its veil Where flowers bloom ‘till thoughts of you Spring forth like lilies’ passion hue And thus alone still shining bright The Paper Birch forgives the night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/7/2010 5:12:00 AM
Inspiring! Morning Jamie! Light & Love
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Date: 6/6/2010 11:58:00 PM
A great tribute to a beautiful tree Jim.Especially liked the euphony/imagery of the penultimate inner poem couplet.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/6/2010 6:35:00 PM
Very apt images you have used with nice rhyming. I appreacite
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:35:00 PM
I can see the scene from this descriptive write..Very emotive also...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 6/6/2010 5:35:00 PM
very heart felt
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