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I found this one on the internet and I know that it is my work..I did not put it on the internet..I also found my poem on the internet for general viewing without my permission..Sara

As I desire outside just at daybreak Watch the sleepy sun rise in the mist So I'll go out, get tools, leaves rake An excuse to watch that sun rise; my risk Then I see that one Pale Pink Running Rose The one deserving its picture taken I'll get the camera; rose will pose Leaving chore; leaf raking forsaken Maybe I'll cachinnate, hide from work I'll beek in sun think of shenanigan Go to creek, try to see fish through murk Couchant posture dip fingers, dawn began The anacoluthia of these lines Requires couchant posture very fine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/20/2010 4:19:00 AM
You paint a pleasing scene, always worth stopping to smell the roses, or watch the dawn :) interesting vocab - I've had to look some of those up !
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Date: 9/19/2010 5:56:00 PM
couchant to you too...whatever that means.
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:40:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:00:00 AM
Enjoyed the imagery and flow in your poem, Sara! Well written!...Gert
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:15:00 AM
Your every word flows to touch the reader, beautiful images and painting you have shared.l... luv Michael
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Date: 9/18/2010 3:51:00 AM
Good morning, Sara I finnaly got a new one up. I also enjoyed the beauty view of your poem. A picture taken perfect. Enjoyed and have yourself a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 9/17/2010 10:08:00 PM
A fine poem dear Sara. Loved the scene created by you. Thanks a lot for your kind comments.
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:04:00 PM
I like the idea of the rose posing for you. It's very sweet. Boy, you used words I never heard before, like couchant and anacoluthia. What do they mean? CAn you tell me why you are putting the little lines _ after some of the words? WAs this for some challenge? Well, I am happy to know about your son, and as we discussed, I have him in my prayers. luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/17/2010 3:53:00 PM
Very happy to hear your good news Sara.. continued prayers and miracles begin..luv..
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Date: 9/17/2010 3:32:00 PM
Sweet and lovely Sonnet Sara.. anything with roses is so beautiful but u have penned a special beauty here ... hope your trip is safe and easy.. well wishes and prayers to all.. hope your back is better today..with luv..
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Date: 9/17/2010 2:58:00 PM
Sara your words are so captivating... what a beautiful flow this poem has... love it...luv Michael
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Date: 9/17/2010 2:13:00 PM
soup mail-Charles
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