Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

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I found this one on the internet and I know that it is my work..I did not put it on the internet..I also found my poem on the internet for general viewing without my permission..Sara

The Pale Pink Rose At Dawn

As I desire outside just at daybreak
Watch the sleepy sun rise in the mist
So I'll go out, get tools, leaves rake
An excuse to watch that sun rise; my risk

Then I see that one Pale Pink Running Rose
The one deserving its picture taken
I'll get the camera; rose will pose
Leaving chore; leaf raking forsaken

Maybe I'll cachinnate, hide from work
I'll beek in sun think of shenanigan
Go to creek, try to see fish through murk
Couchant posture dip fingers, dawn began

The anacoluthia of these lines
Requires couchant posture very fine

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Nick Bagnall September 20, 2010 at 4:19 AM You paint a pleasing scene, always worth stopping to smell the roses, or watch the dawn :) interesting vocab - I've had to look some of those up !

Doris Culverhouse September 19, 2010 at 5:56 PM couchant to you too...whatever that means.

Skat A September 19, 2010 at 11:40 AM Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT

Gert W. Knop September 18, 2010 at 7:00 AM Enjoyed the imagery and flow in your poem, Sara! Well written!...Gert

Michael J. Falotico September 18, 2010 at 6:15 AM Your every word flows to touch the reader, beautiful images and painting you have shared.l... luv Michael

Poet Destroyer A September 18, 2010 at 3:51 AM Good morning, Sara I finnaly got a new one up. I also enjoyed the beauty view of your poem. A picture taken perfect. Enjoyed and have yourself a nice one,..p.d.

Tahera Mannan September 17, 2010 at 10:08 PM A fine poem dear Sara. Loved the scene created by you. Thanks a lot for your kind comments.

Andrea Dietrich September 17, 2010 at 7:04 PM I like the idea of the rose posing for you. It's very sweet. Boy, you used words I never heard before, like couchant and anacoluthia. What do they mean? CAn you tell me why you are putting the little lines _ after some of the words? WAs this for some challenge? Well, I am happy to know about your son, and as we discussed, I have him in my prayers. luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2010 at 3:53 PM Very happy to hear your good news Sara.. continued prayers and miracles begin..luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 17, 2010 at 3:32 PM Sweet and lovely Sonnet Sara.. anything with roses is so beautiful but u have penned a special beauty here ... hope your trip is safe and easy.. well wishes and prayers to all.. hope your back is better today..with luv..

Michael J. Falotico September 17, 2010 at 2:58 PM Sara your words are so captivating... what a beautiful flow this poem has... love it...luv Michael

Charles Henderson September 17, 2010 at 2:13 PM soup mail-Charles