The Painted Lady

She pats her combed and curled up hair   
painted lips twist into a sad smile.
Tucking her mama's hanky
between her  powdered bosoms.
She thinks of Home

Lonely Cowpokes drift in from the badlands  
gunslingers crowd  around the bar.
Card sharks bluff  and bluster at every table
playing till their money is gone
The  hot night air thick with whiskey:  
cigar smoke and danger

She gasps.. an excited shiver
trickling down her spine.
Stepping out onto the landing 
she gathers her courage 

she hurries to her admirer's side.
For a little hanky panky the drifter has traveled far 
She will drink and dance the night away. 
A sweetheart for his dime

The morning  after.. Daylight 
will shine on just a painted lady
sleeping sweetly; 
dressed only in her angelic smile..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 6:19 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Patricia. Love, Carol
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June 24, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Love the imagery in this piece. Good write, Al
Neels Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 12:06 PM
Awesome images that accompany your story, enjoyed this read - tc WN
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