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The Painted Blue Rose

Blue was his wife's favorite color So he bought her a painted blue rose She said she'd never seen anything like it So she carries it where ever she goes He woke up early one morning To make his wife breakfest in bed The rose lay alone on the table Beside it his wife was found dead The blue rose was placed on her coffin Then removed when they lowered her down Cast aside with the discarded trash That was lying closeby on the ground A little girl around nine or ten Picked it up and took it back home Here on vacation to visit her family But now on her way back to Rome She gave the rose to her Grandmother Who carried it all the way to Japan Who then gave the rose to her waitress For lending her a helping hand The waitress gives the rose to a stranger Who was now on his way back to France Who gave the rose to his daughter As her whole class was watching her dance She then gave the rose to her teacher Who was leaving to start a new life He was on his way to America To be with his children and wife He then gave the rose to his brother Who's still grieving the death of his bride He places the rose on her gravestone Where it started the day that she died

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/29/2010 9:48:00 PM
What imaginative writing this one! Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:43:00 AM
Very creative and touching indeed. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Larry. Lainie
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Date: 6/20/2010 2:55:00 PM
Wow this one gave me goosebumps!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/19/2010 11:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this amazing poem ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 10:51:00 PM
Beautiful, Larry- you are winning a heck of a lot of contest lately. Congrats my poetic genius friend.
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Date: 6/19/2010 9:39:00 PM
Congrats Larry on your 1st place win in the Blue Rose contest.. a glorious poem and enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Larry, this is beautiful....Karla
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations Larry, i'm proud to share no. 1 with you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations Larry......Beautiful life of a rose! Best Jeralynn
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:20:00 PM
Larry, a masterpiece. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest.
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:25:00 AM
Hi again Larry--as I was reading this, I actually knew where it was heading but I couldn't help feeling those chills--I found this to be such a very moving & beautiful piece--Wow. I sure do hope this wins...nikko :) & isn't that the coolest thing?? my captcha for this comment is FAVY!! haha definitely a fave Larry (or should I say favy??) ;)
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:39:00 AM
Larry, Have you ever written stories/novels? I think you could. I can see this made into a childrens story that would capture little heartsl It did mine...BG
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Date: 6/16/2010 6:29:00 AM
Amen to what Sara said. Awesome. Ralph
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Date: 6/16/2010 4:03:00 AM
Excellent write that drew me in and held my attention..Keep the creative pen flowing with the creativeness and emotiveness of the a great writer...Sara
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