The Painted Blue Rose

Blue was his wife's favorite color
So he bought her a painted blue rose
She said she'd never seen anything like it
So she carries it where ever she goes

He woke up early one morning
To make his wife breakfest in bed
The rose lay alone on the table
Beside it his wife was found dead

The blue rose was placed on her coffin
Then removed when they lowered her down
Cast aside with the discarded trash
That was lying closeby on the ground

A little girl around nine or ten
Picked it up and took it back home
Here on vacation to visit her family
But now on her way back to Rome

She gave the rose to her Grandmother
Who carried it all the way to Japan
Who then gave the rose to her waitress
For lending her a helping hand

The waitress gives the rose to a stranger
Who was now on his way back to France
Who gave the rose to his daughter
As her whole class was watching her dance

She then gave the rose to her teacher
Who was leaving to start a new life
He was on his way to America
To be with his children and wife

He then gave the rose to his brother
Who's still grieving the death of his bride
He places the rose on her gravestone
Where it started the day that she died
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 9:48 PM
What imaginative writing this one! Congratulations! LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Congratulations Larry on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
George   Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:43 AM
Very creative and touching indeed. Congratulations on your well deserved win, Larry. Lainie
Conway Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:55 PM
Wow this one gave me goosebumps!~Tirzah~
Tideswell Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 11:45 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this amazing poem ~ Sharon :)
Green Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 10:51 PM
Beautiful, Larry- you are winning a heck of a lot of contest lately. Congrats my poetic genius friend.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 9:39 PM
Congrats Larry on your 1st place win in the Blue Rose contest.. a glorious poem and enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
Null Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:39 PM
Congratulations Larry, this is beautiful....Karla
Johnson Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:13 PM
Congratulations Larry, i'm proud to share no. 1 with you. Love, Joyce
Clark Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 7:08 PM
Congratulations Larry......Beautiful life of a rose! Best Jeralynn
Mcgovern Avatar
June 19, 2010 at 6:20 PM
Larry, a masterpiece. Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest.
K. Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Hi again Larry--as I was reading this, I actually knew where it was heading but I couldn't help feeling those chills--I found this to be such a very moving & beautiful piece--Wow. I sure do hope this wins...nikko :) & isn't that the coolest thing?? my captcha for this comment is FAVY!! haha definitely a fave Larry (or should I say favy??) ;)
Gorelick Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 8:39 AM
Larry, Have you ever written stories/novels? I think you could. I can see this made into a childrens story that would capture little heartsl It did mine...BG
Taylor Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 6:29 AM
Amen to what Sara said. Awesome. Ralph
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2010 at 4:03 AM
Excellent write that drew me in and held my attention..Keep the creative pen flowing with the creativeness and emotiveness of the a great writer...Sara
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