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The Paint On the Wall

The paint on the wall , tells a story about a girl , who was vulnerable and broken... Darkness in everywhere , and you can notice when you stare , that an anchor wrapped around her nick makes her choking.... Tears run down her face , no sort of hope or light to chase , she can't stop screaming... She tight her eyes and pray , but the pain don't fade away , she slowly stops from breathing.... The paint on the wall , tells a story about a girl , who is hurting... From the very start , flames contains her heart , her soul is burning... She's all alone , her strength has gone, so she held the white flag to death and started to wave... She fought as possible as she could and maybe more than she should , hard end she had but yet so powerful, so brave... So the paint that's on the wall , tells a story about a girl , who had the strongest fight... A battle to release herself from darkness , a battle to guide her soul towards light... The girl in the paint that's on the wall will always be there.... And you may see her ghost if you just stood and stare...

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Anil Deo

Date: 5/18/2018 8:54:00 PM

Keep writing Dalia. We are praying for Jerusalem. Those who harvest pain for the world, are reaping a whirlwind. God is the ultimate patient Judge. But He's Judge and His judgment is final. Ramadhan Kareem. ameen

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/24/2018 1:57:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear every word of yours mean so much to me , I really appreciate it ?

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/19/2018 10:55:00 PM

the paint on the wall....is just paint and thats all....to think it is more is to fall....into death's stinky stall....like only you are the one with the gall....to stand up without robbing peter to pay paul....Beautiful as always my friend....;)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/19/2018 11:49:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear for your beautiful words as always , much appreciated , hugs//:)

White Sage

Date: 11/28/2017 12:45:00 PM

Now I see a lot of ardour in this piece, and there's a lot of darkness. This is one excellent picture you've painted dear. I can see the girl in her apathy, lingering on the borders of redemption. Perhaps there would've been little hope if someone had stayed long enough to see her pains. I see her as a warrior against her own kind of wars. Perhaps, nobody could've fought any better than she did. It's inexplicable, everybody's portion of life's deal! You've really done so well with the imagery, I seem to find myself staring at a portrait so full of pains. I know it takes a lot to born such a piece as this. Though, it would be better if you work more on it, doing some restructuring and syntax checks. But all in all, I applaud your excellence in this piece. It's really really a great one, a work well down to you dear!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 11/29/2017 8:57:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear friend for all of your magnificent support , u always give me a great energy and a push to write more and to serve more great poetry , I really do appreciate it , hugs // :)