The Paint Mover

Vanishing varnish kindly stood the test of
time in sweet and salty impermanence

A boat shed overgrown and faded into
significance of messages and meaning
of rays and days going by and moving on

And nights of course with moon and
stars abiding wheels of life’s abundance

The window graced with murky shades
of innocence where a young man had written
‘I love you’ into a heartfelt arrowed heart

The frame of recollection held the pane
in fading colours like a rainbow on the wane

Distressed wood weather beaten yet
many layers of green and red and yellow
sing the blues of long forgotten journeys

Flaking pealing retreating and still appealing
to nostalgia and loving longing contemplation

What once was stark from mighty strokes
brushing over knots where branches twisted
have retreated to embrace a new beginning

Holes in the door reveal a vessel still with oars
one holds a violet rose in innocence and love

The seasons have moved the man-made paint
towards new adventures where winds of change
have waited on the surfaces caressed by storms

How much I’m deeply touched by ageing shine only
the boat house knows as I speak to it in sandy whispers

It answers ‘Please don’t cover up my codes of beauty
Do not coat another overlay of glossy lamination
Let the elements take over because they know for sure'

05th October 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/18/2018 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Anthony's contest, Kai - blessings and best wishes, and keep up the great work! :-)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2018 1:36:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. I appreciate that. Lots of wishes tou you, Kai
Date: 10/18/2018 2:08:00 PM
It seems as though, this dream has become a reality- as you have won in this contest. :) Congratulations Kai. ~ Brandy
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2018 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Brandy. I just like the weathered wood of the sheds of life. They cast a load from my dreamy shoulders, Kai
Date: 10/17/2018 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kai. Well done.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2018 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Line.. There is flaking paint all around me and that feels good. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 10/6/2018 9:40:00 PM
You capture the moment, the memories. Such beautiful images you paint with your words. ~ Brandy
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2018 2:28:00 AM
Thank you Brandy. I guess I am a dreamer deep down in my heart. Many dreams and wishes to you, Kai
Date: 10/5/2018 3:20:00 AM
- The years pass and the elements do as they have always done - A lovely poem to read, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/6/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile.
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