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The Paint Mover

Vanishing varnish kindly stood the test of time in sweet and salty impermanence A boat shed overgrown and faded into significance of messages and meaning of rays and days going by and moving on And nights of course with moon and stars abiding wheels of life’s abundance The window graced with murky shades of innocence where a young man had written ‘I love you’ into a heartfelt arrowed heart The frame of recollection held the pane in fading colours like a rainbow on the wane Distressed wood weather beaten yet many layers of green and red and yellow sing the blues of long forgotten journeys Flaking pealing retreating and still appealing to nostalgia and loving longing contemplation What once was stark from mighty strokes brushing over knots where branches twisted have retreated to embrace a new beginning Holes in the door reveal a vessel still with oars one holds a violet rose in innocence and love The seasons have moved the man-made paint towards new adventures where winds of change have waited on the surfaces caressed by storms How much I’m deeply touched by ageing shine only the boat house knows as I speak to it in sandy whispers It answers ‘Please don’t cover up my codes of beauty Do not coat another overlay of glossy lamination Let the elements take over because they know for sure' 05th October 2018

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Date: 10/18/2018 6:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Anthony's contest, Kai - blessings and best wishes, and keep up the great work! :-)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2018 1:36:00 AM
Thank you Gregory. I appreciate that. Lots of wishes tou you, Kai
Date: 10/18/2018 2:08:00 PM
It seems as though, this dream has become a reality- as you have won in this contest. :) Congratulations Kai. ~ Brandy
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/20/2018 1:44:00 AM
Thank you Brandy. I just like the weathered wood of the sheds of life. They cast a load from my dreamy shoulders, Kai
Date: 10/17/2018 6:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kai. Well done.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2018 2:24:00 AM
Thank you Line.. There is flaking paint all around me and that feels good. Kind wishes, Kai
Date: 10/6/2018 9:40:00 PM
You capture the moment, the memories. Such beautiful images you paint with your words. ~ Brandy
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2018 2:28:00 AM
Thank you Brandy. I guess I am a dreamer deep down in my heart. Many dreams and wishes to you, Kai
Date: 10/5/2018 3:20:00 AM
- The years pass and the elements do as they have always done - A lovely poem to read, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/6/2018 2:09:00 AM
Thank you Sunshine Smile.

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