The Pain I Fell Inside

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 this is for any one who has ever been a victim of violence or bullying or abuse. I know the pain you fell i was bullied all the time in school so i know how you fell. Don't become a victim take a stand if not for yourself please do it for someone else.
Help me please let me out i am trapped in my pain. The life i live is insane inside my pain
 you can't see. Every day this pain i must embrace i try to tell but i am told don't you 
dare. Your life is full of beautiful things mine is full of dirty things. I am young and my 
body is beaten and bruised all my life i have been abused. On my face i show my pain 
please help me unleash my pain. I want a life of beautiful things not a life where i am 
forced to do dirty things. Can you help me stop my pain so in my mind i can stop the 
rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/13/2011 9:20:00 PM
Very Deep.. the emotions seem impossible to stop......Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a lovely night ;-) ,..LINDA
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Craig Schaber
Date: 11/14/2011 3:12:00 PM
thanks you have a nice night to
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