The Packing of a Suitcase
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You stood in your bedroom
clutching your Paddington Bear suitcase
With tears in your eyes
you said you’re leaving home
You’d packed your toy cars
and brightly coloured Lego bricks
Don’t forget your favourite bear
I said with a smile
Please don’t leave me son …
It’s not easy being three!
10 lines 5 words III contest
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3/14/18
Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2018
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