The Packing of a Suitcase

As I open the suitcase
The lavender scent fills me
I choose my grandmother's pearls
The well-worn family Bible
Photo albums of lost faces
My favorite book, "Charlotte's Web"
Inside, on yellowed notebook paper
The first poem I wrote
"Let's go, Mom. It's time."
"Who are you?," she says.


3/12/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:11 PM
A most endearing poem, Michelle. Congrats on your win.
Barden Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Michelle - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
Faulkner Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Thank you gregory - so grateful for your kind comment!
Scars Avatar
March 21, 2018 at 6:40 AM
i always loved that book! great poem thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Faulkner Avatar
March 23, 2018 at 8:22 AM
so appreciate it!
Wolf Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Eerie: I was sure that I commented on this last week. Oh, well: 'Senior moment,' I guess...At any rate, here goes: This is a winner, Michelle. Poignant, heart-rending imagery,---and that last line cuts to the quick. Kudos!
Faulkner Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Yes this is the 'child becomes parent' stage of life for me-
Krutsinger Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 8:46 AM
Poignant. I am now following you, Michelle. I have to.
Faulkner Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:31 AM
So kind of you, Caren!
Thomas Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Michelle this grabbed my throat. This is beautiful yet so very sad.
Faulkner Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 9:31 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment!
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