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The Packing of a Suitcase

As I open the suitcase The lavender scent fills me I choose my grandmother's pearls The well-worn family Bible Photo albums of lost faces My favorite book, "Charlotte's Web" Inside, on yellowed notebook paper The first poem I wrote "Let's go, Mom. It's time." "Who are you?," she says. 3/12/18

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Date: 4/9/2018 10:11:00 PM
A most endearing poem, Michelle. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/30/2018 4:57:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Michelle - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 4/1/2018 1:25:00 PM
Thank you gregory - so grateful for your kind comment!
Date: 3/21/2018 6:40:00 AM
i always loved that book! great poem thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/23/2018 8:22:00 AM
so appreciate it!
Date: 3/18/2018 10:09:00 PM
Eerie: I was sure that I commented on this last week. Oh, well: 'Senior moment,' I guess...At any rate, here goes: This is a winner, Michelle. Poignant, heart-rending imagery,---and that last line cuts to the quick. Kudos!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/19/2018 8:33:00 AM
Yes this is the 'child becomes parent' stage of life for me-
Date: 3/18/2018 8:46:00 AM
Poignant. I am now following you, Michelle. I have to.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/18/2018 9:31:00 AM
So kind of you, Caren!
Date: 3/13/2018 1:25:00 PM
Michelle this grabbed my throat. This is beautiful yet so very sad.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/18/2018 9:31:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment!

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