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The Other Side of Love

many days of trouble can not equal one day of doubt days can make you mad but doubt can make you shout toil and frustration are done out of grief hell and damnation not much relief the fears of losing your love an unbeliefe the strain is too much for the mind to find its peace it's better, much better not to fall in love but love is like the weather sent from heaven above

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Date: 8/11/2010 5:38:00 PM
This poem is very good because I like the expressions and the rhyming is very well done. Great job and keep on writing!
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:28:00 AM
love is like the weather,haha,so true. .hot and cold,warm and breezed,I love the way you described the four letter word!Great!Celene!
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:47:00 PM
Love is like the weather it can either rain bringing tears or like the sun bringing a smile to the face. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:04:00 PM
It comes on when you least expect it...Like the weather!
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Date: 7/29/2010 5:36:00 PM
I hope that this is just a write about love loss and not your life, John...You made some good statements here ....There say it is better to have loved and lost to never have loved at all..I don't know about that because I have not experienced that kind of loss..I am sure that it is painful..Thank you for stopping by and commenting on my write about the Purple Phlox(probably more accurate lavender)..I was looking at it out of the window with summer shadow cast across it...Sara
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Date: 7/29/2010 3:53:00 PM
Very good expressions. ~~Alex(:
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