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The Other Side

On the day I lost your love I knew When I tried to walk you home You stopped In my confusion I guessed We were no longer the same The other side They had won Your smile no longer assured Your giggle cut like a saw Your lyrical walk an eyesore On the day I lost your love it rained I swore to my god and cried The other side ...

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Aqua Marine

Date: 4/23/2019 4:57:00 PM

Carry on Writing! I look forward to your next poems....: )

Aqua Marine

Date: 4/17/2019 1:50:00 PM

Touching words, M Braimah Saakah...Desperate feelings about loss, honestly expressed. Thank you for posting a heartfelt poem.

M Braimah Saaka
Date: 4/17/2019 4:14:00 PM

This is the second of poems about IMAT - my college sweetheart. The one that got away??. I’m planning a third to make it a trilogy. It means a lot to me that you like it.