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The Other Man

I look at her in wonder. Does she see through my disguise? Will she ever know the depth in me... That I'm not like other guys. That I'm not a dime a dozen. I'm not Tom, Dick, or Harry. I'm the man who never hurt you, and yet their burdens, I have to carry. Will she ever ascertain the truth? Whilst enfolded on the floor. Does she know this man is weeping, behind the bedroom door. I have to prove it all to her. For her, I'll endure it till the end. I will softly hold her heart in hand, and gently, I shall mend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/9/2010 6:47:00 AM
Amy, this is a terrific poem, The feelings in your words are tremendous. Many congratulations on your win in Nathan's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:20:00 PM
This was really great and explains perfectly some of the stuff a man has to go through to be with a woman who has been hurt. Really liked this a lot.
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Date: 5/3/2010 12:51:00 PM
Wow this is a great write, yes the baggage some of us carry from failed relationships. I guess that the next guy has to wade through to gain trust and love completely...Allie...
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Date: 5/2/2010 6:52:00 PM
Very passionate poem on love
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:20:00 PM
Beautiful. I really like this. Love the way you told it. Painted an easily relateable story. Enjoyed. :)
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Date: 5/2/2010 12:11:00 PM
a great side of you, shell fold for you,..p.d.
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