The Other 1-In Your Eyes-A Series of One Liners

I look into the reflection in your beautiful eyes and see him 12-20-16

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/13/2018 6:37:00 PM

I like your one-liner :) now I must read all of them :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/5/2017 7:17:00 PM

wow! I worked my way backwards to the first great one liner and there we have it. The EYES have it.

James Inman
Date: 2/5/2017 8:03:00 PM

Clever Andrea. Thanks for spending time reading all of them. They are all related as part of the same theme. I once knew someone that I grew to care a great deal for and then I met her boyfriend. As she walked away she slipped her fingers between his and I had such intense and inexplicable feelings, partly guilt for desiring her and partly sadness for knowing I could never have her.