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The Orchid Moon and I

The orchid moon and I look in kind
at the dimpled ocean's
aubergine plain, meandering thought's
violet caves.  I've lost my way
in the lavender vortex 
of a tuberous begonia.

A July storm has passed.
Brackish petrichor lilts with the purr 
of surf, now jade in lilac light,
unfolding on mulberry sand,
effervescing at my ankles,
gentle as cat fur.

This full moon buoys
out past merlot bluffs,
reposing on a mauve ribbon
between sea and plum sky;
periwinkle stars beg to spark
beside the aura of a steadfast satellite
that casts the grape of night
in fixed solitude.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Stunning imagery (as always!!!) Love this and I see congrats are in order. CONGRATULATIONS.
Cozart Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Ashley Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Returning with congratulations, Dale, for your wonderful win with your exquisite poem. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Krutsinger Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 11:03 AM
This poem reminds me of the glory of the old master poets, namely my favorite - Coleridge. So well-thought out and executed!
Cozart Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Thank you, Caren, I appreciate that.
Krampe Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Lovely symphony in shades of violet. Congrats!
Cozart Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thank you, Agnes.
Gauthier Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 2:22 PM
Lovely imagery, Dale. So rich. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Waters Avatar
July 9, 2018 at 3:02 AM
love your painted poems. filling richness
Onclaud Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 11:19 AM
effervescent as moonlight flaunting its glory... astounding flow, dale... huggs
Cozart Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Thanks, Nette!
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:13 PM
Wow.. this is a fav. The pic is incredible too!!
Cozart Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thanks, Lyric Man!
Ashley Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:46 PM
Your imagery is not only rich in color, Dale, but it's luxuriant in tactile imagery as well. Your expression is exquisite! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Thank you, Susan.
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