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The Orbit

The orbit.

You drew  a  circle,  the cute
geometry, around you ,
an orbit permitted /forbidden

for a foregone specificity.
Made it large enough that
you  weren’t out of it,  pulled  

or not,  by the old gravity  
that  seizes the ever  raw  soul .
You went about  fooling with

the geodesies of here
and  its forms  of  acceptance in 
another there , encountering 

nothing that  you  would   
ever make a  compact  with.
A  random  peaceableness

perhaps  on a loose day
just before it  breaks  into a spell
of  footloose this and that  , 

heart  punching  buttons  
calling  moral police to march
into  a mere mail box

and  you in the witness box
inside the circle you drew    
a square peg in a round orbit.


By S.Jagathsimhan Nair

For SKAT A's contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/11/2015 2:39:00 AM
such a wise, deep melody that makes me ponder... sweet congrats, jag.. come on over!.. huggs
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:43:00 PM
Awesome pen Nair ! Superb write n great win ! Big congrats!
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Date: 7/25/2015 11:22:00 PM
Congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/25/2015 10:59:00 PM
JAG. Congratulations on your awesome win. Love SKAT
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