The Orange Tree

The concrete jungle shines and gleams
All around shiny glass beams
And amid this dusty shimmering sea
Stands a lone orange tree

The fragrant flowers silently blooms
Seeking the warmth from the sun that looms
The birds have left and stopped their calls
It is quiet, not a sound falls

The weary traveller sits beneath
Seeking the cool underneath
Touching the smooth, fragile bark
Dreaming of some sparrow or maybe a lark

Perhaps he dreams of a wasted love
Escaped like a frightened dove
Or some happy memory
That from him has become free

This gentle haven amid the fire
A place to commune and retire
And all around lovers came this vision to see
And feel the enchantment under the orange tree

25/11/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fraser Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 9:02 AM
Tahera, reading this makes me want to be beside the lone Orange Tree. Beautiful visions of tranquillity abound in your words. A most beautiful write :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 10:07 PM
great imagery. gosh, this one could be entered into the tree contest (I am trying to think if that one needed to use a specific form but you could make this into that form!) Glad I read it today.
Andresen Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 7:09 AM
Thank you for this beautiful and well done poem,Tahera. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Guha Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Very nice work Mam. good imagination. loved reading it! :)
Freeman Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 9:05 AM
Very peaceful setting Tahera, beautiful job. Agape, Moses
Poet Avatar
December 31, 2011 at 10:45 PM
Nice write here Tahera.Wish you a Very very Happy New Year.
Ejaz Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 7:31 AM
Thanks sister for sharing such a ncie poem. I realy enjoyed it. The flow and use of words is realy amazing. Allah may bless u
Osita Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 11:17 AM
what a nice picture of this orange tree. Each line well worded with sweet rhyme. Nice work,Tahera. Have a nice day
Lane Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 9:23 AM
We all need such a place. Mine is usually at the barbeque.
Seraphin Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 8:54 AM
* "Always A Joy Whenever Finding Your Gifted & Lovely Beauties Verse * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Tahera * Sooo Magnificent & Enchanting This Wonderful Picturesque Painting * Almost Fairytalistic Its Voice & Colours * A Mirrored Glimpse Into Your Own Priceless & Tender Beauty * T'would Be Your Lovely Self 8 Believe That * Countless Would Come to Gaze Upon Within Joy * Very Beautiful * My Luv, Always & Forever * Sarah." *
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November 25, 2011 at 7:59 AM
One of the best poem I have read in a long time... simply beautiful on every level of Poetry...luv Michael
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