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Footsteps absorbed as maids descend into the Delphi's cave they went. Pellucidar is what they sought; no thoughts of Dante's lurid hell; questing an inner earth to dwell. Down where the core a sun begot; footsteps absorbed as maids descend into the Delphi's cave they went. Green life fluoresced where light was cast. The lakes and waterfalls were vast. Pendicular is what they sought, down where the core a sun begot. Footsteps absorbed as maids descend into the Delphi's cave they went.

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Date: 11/7/2014 5:39:00 PM
Excellent.......so well deserved to sit at the top of the list !! As always, I'm in awe !
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Date: 11/6/2014 10:09:00 PM
AWesome, Debs!!! You are on top with this excellent poem. Congrats.
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:30:00 PM
It reads to me, beautifully, like a mystic's dream, how all things can layer, overlap like a ethereal collage -- meant to intrigue and startle with odds of imagery. YES! Brilliant. xoxo Congratulations! Well deserved.
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:33:00 PM
PS-- Sometimes I wish we could start a betting pool on somethings ;) Like how long it will take before X does Y. LOL!!!
Date: 11/6/2014 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations Debbie on your first place win. We are lying in the same bed on this one and you're on top. Lots of Love.
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Date: 11/6/2014 12:19:00 PM
Big congrats on your win Debbie...
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:34:00 AM
A super win with this amazing unique entry Debbie. Big congrats on your win. Your poem and picture together are mesmerizing!
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Date: 11/6/2014 10:25:00 AM
What a picture. Congrats on your big win Deb...
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Date: 11/6/2014 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place top of the podium win Debbie. Well deserved with this amazing poem.
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Date: 11/6/2014 6:42:00 AM
Congrats Debbie,this is simply fantastic.
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Date: 11/6/2014 4:00:00 AM
Thanks for the entry and congrats on the win, Debbie. Light and Love
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Date: 11/6/2014 2:30:00 AM
wow the picture is awesome and the poem simply stunning - many congrats on your top spot Debbie:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/28/2014 3:19:00 PM
It's very easy to picture the ritual, with this Sonnetina Rispetto and I'm waiting to see what it reveals.
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Date: 10/21/2014 8:49:00 PM
I see that you're entering the Sonnetina Rispetto contest Debbie. I liked your poem and the pic is cool. Thank you for using my Sonnetina Rispetto form, Debbie. And GL with the contest! Love and light!xxx D.
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