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The Opulent Bird of Peace

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12/22/2023 In the softest, snowflaked, winter moonlight she walks The townspeople peered out their frosted windows fora chance peak. Not a precious feather moves, and she is not stalked. All knew not to mess with her, for she is their hope and not a town freak! Rebelloisuness courses through her throbbing, silent. robust veins. She dreams of a world in peace, free of all govermental intervention . A must,is that, on any writer, forbidden foreever, any attempt to dare their pen to restrain, Streets for all, to walk without dark fear, a world sparkling with open, jubilant communication!

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 1/20/2024 5:37:00 AM

Pangie Pangie Pangie. Good Morning. I found this most beautiful with so much light and elegance attached. And yes, I found your word choices and executions poetic. May this day find you well. It was a pleasure turning to your page this morning. I will return again soon. Have a wonderful morning and weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 1/20/2024 6:17:00 AM

A most kind comment….Lisa May the sun rise and bless you with expanded horizons on our Poetic journey. You exhibit great skill in your poetry, i must thank you. What a great soul you have! Pangie xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/23/2023 7:40:00 PM

I like how you framed the dove of peace as a 'dangerous radical.' Nifty write. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/23/2023 8:28:00 PM

Hello, GW, you found the golden nugget in this one. Thank you for pointing that outL I could not have put it better,. You saw the heart of the matter in this, right. Thank you.. Pangie

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/23/2023 6:19:00 PM

Thanks for writing this poem for everyone. Peace is needed

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/23/2023 8:23:00 PM

Hilda, beauty, truth, widom! Integrity and full self expression are all points of light in a star called peace. We can all be part of that star by our being genuine with everybody and not trying to impress anyone., people like that are true gifts. Pangie

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 12/23/2023 3:23:00 PM

Dear lovely Panagiota, It's great deluxe poem. Six line is my favorite "She dreams of a world in peace, free of all govermental (governmental) intervention" By the way, my major is Economics. A favorite poem for sure :-)

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/23/2023 4:15:00 PM

Dear Abdullah. I am so glad you liked those six lines.. so did I)) They were very powerful.. Since you’re majoring yin economics, good heavens, you know what’s going on.. I listen to programs on TV about all the economic devastation that’s going on right here in United States. And other places. I don’t know when the government will stop printing money, and supporting every nation in the world.. and then have the UN tell us we are a bad nation, and our allies won’t even back us? If we can’t stand for ourselves, and our allies won’t back us up, then what!All our taxes support everything non-American. I really don’t understand it. And children in the USA get the worst education in the world. That’s a sin. Plus, we are supposed to shut up and go along with the government run by Mr. potato head? Golly, not me. Thank you , Holiday Greetings Pangie.

Regina Elliott

Date: 12/23/2023 3:12:00 PM

So very beauteous, Pangie. A wondrous thought for my imagination, and I'm sure many other readers share that sentiment. Peace On Earth. xxxx

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/23/2023 4:08:00 PM

Thank you Regina such a wonderful comment from you. This can be interpreted anyway people want to.. it has more than one meaning. It seems that belong I’ve been on earth it each year gets more violent. That really saddened me. I think you know that already.. merry Christmas Pangie

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2023 11:22:00 PM

Love the imagery in the two sentences. I too wish for a gentler government with giving to its people for hope is the key. Hope you are staying warm. It's decided to be warm these past few days and it feels good. Merry Christmas my friend.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/23/2023 11:55:00 AM

Hello, Eve, yes! Staying warm and imside. We do not owe the government, they owe us! We pay them to laws are in place.Not break them! Riots are not the AMerican way. But we cannot be told what id right by them. And some, wow, liars. Anyway, i wish you a Merry Christmas, dear Eve,Oangie and family.

Elena Eagle

Date: 12/22/2023 8:11:00 PM

This poem is very well written. A piece of art for us all to enjoy. Thank you.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 12/22/2023 8:27:00 PM

Hi, Elena thank you very much there are several levels of meaning in that poem. And I think that you know what they are.. you’re good with people. I can’t say the same for myself. I have been extremely tired lately.. working late hours wrapping presents. I’m really tired.. Sure!))) Actually, I am a retired elf. Pangie ))