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May 9, 2017.
Form O - Only One - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

The Opalescent Spring

O Spring, come spread smile,
          frozen days will turn bright,
Buds will peep in unique style,
     birds shall chirp with delight.

With scary sky, dull and grey,
          winter was all white and wet,
For your eternal beauty, I pray,
     with warm days, ideal sunset.

Cherry blossom, won’t be far, 
          maple leaves will appear soon,
Greenery will fill-up, soil’s scar,
     and stars will shine like moon.

Tulips shall dance with daffodils,
          butterflies will be fluttering,
Nature owns, magnificent skills,
     hurry up my opalescent spring.
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La France Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Meenakshi congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
Allison Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 8:17 AM
What a delightful spring ode Meenakshi:-) I'm glad to say spring has arrived on our little Island and I love the brighter warmer days and the lovely colours in the gardens:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 3:09 PM
Beautiful, promising imagery in your lovely Ode to Spring, Meenakshi. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Turner Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 8:48 AM
Very lovely, Meenakshi. Good luck!
Raina Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Daniel....good to see that you are back!
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