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The Only Star For Me

There is but one star, of which all creation is an evolving flicker A radiance without and within – a gleam of our present humanity~ while a beam from where we have all been, an ember seeking its greater body and place to light we are the many of the the present day plus the volatility yet hidden within that ever birthing night Christ our brilliant Twin, a place reserved for us in the vastness of endless sky, to emulate and share one star one beckoning immortal flair (entry for Mystic Rose's contest, "The One And Only Star For Me"

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Date: 11/12/2022 4:24:00 AM
A beautiful poem Joe
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/12/2022 4:37:00 AM
Hi Wendy; so pleased this one speaks to you. Christ the only light in my sky. Blessings my friend.
Date: 11/11/2022 8:53:00 PM
Very aptly said, Joe, Christ is the star:)
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/12/2022 4:40:00 AM
Burning bright in the heart and soul of humanity~ our beacon and our salvation. Less we wander aimlessly through endless cycles of dark materialism. Blessings Jo!
Date: 11/11/2022 1:52:00 AM
So beautiful, so spiritual.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/11/2022 6:17:00 AM
Thank you, Victor; your positive feedback means a lot to me. Blessings my friend.
Date: 11/10/2022 6:38:00 PM
Your elegant poem is beautifully summed up in the lines-" one star one beckoning / immortal flair...." Yes, God is the only star. Lovely penning Joe. All the Best!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/10/2022 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa; such a joy to write of one's deeply held spiritual beliefs. Blessings my friend.
Date: 11/10/2022 4:55:00 PM
In all creation, we see echoes of God's love. The imagery of this beautiful poem is stunning. Have a nice evening, Evelyn
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/10/2022 5:53:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn; so pleased you like this work. It speaks to my soul. Blessings.
Date: 11/10/2022 12:26:00 PM
Your poem dwells in realm of divinity, Joe. Splendid words of faith honor the star to so many-- who revere him. Your words resonate.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 11/10/2022 2:18:00 PM
You made my day! Thank you, Vijay.

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