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The Only Star For Me

Is my Sun your Sun too? It beams a light of warm embrace while shining back at you. The Sun is fine and does not mind that we two share its view, for my Sun is your Sun too. Is my Moon your Moon too? Oh, how its phases change through space while staring back at you. The Moon is fine and does not mind that we two share its view, for my Moon is your Moon too. Are those Stars your Stars too? They pierce the night with glittered grace in glimmering review. Those Stars are fine and they don't mind since they're just passing through, for they know well... my only star is you. 11-6-22

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Date: 12/27/2022 4:22:00 PM
Mark, I love the three-part aspect of this love story, with its patterns and cadence yielding to a surprise ending. Well-crafted, as is your wont. Enjoyed very much ~ John
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Date: 11/13/2022 3:45:00 PM
wow, I love this one. not sure how high your placement is, but for me, a fave.
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Date: 11/11/2022 11:17:00 AM
Very nice with a hint of romance! Congratulations, Mark!
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Date: 11/11/2022 9:17:00 AM
The stars, sun and moon, love them too. A lovely poem for the one it’s written for. Congratulations on your win in the contest.. Belle
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Date: 11/6/2022 9:09:00 PM
What a great poem! Love it!
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Date: 11/6/2022 8:34:00 PM
Beautifully done Mark ! You have approached the subject with sheer novelty ! All the Best!
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Date: 11/6/2022 10:20:00 AM
I love this little poem, Mark. It says so much that resonates with my heart these days.
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