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The Only Birds That Never Sleep

Silver'd whisps, diaphanous, floating 'neath the ether, flying high like prophecy or prayer. Black forbidding masses rumbling out their message, jagged bolts of lightning rend the air. Innocuous or deadly, omens to discerning eyes, it would behoove us all to heed the skies. Note: title courtesy of Victor Hugo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/27/2012 7:42:00 AM
Great job with this poem Keith. I like it all. Smooth and flowing with an ominnous air of formidable expectation. I enjoyed it. Very well done in my opinion. Thanks for your comment.
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Date: 4/26/2012 7:55:00 PM
Oie, those black birds can look so creepy, Keith! I'd hike it back into the house if I'd seen those "jagged bolts of lightning"! The robins and I like to chase them away..oh, love those robins!:) Beautifully done, somehow, I'm never surprised!! Best wishes, love, Mikki :)
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