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The Only Birds That Never Sleep

Silver'd whisps, diaphanous, floating 'neath the ether, flying high like prophecy or prayer. Black forbidding masses rumbling out their message, jagged bolts of lightning rend the air. Innocuous or deadly, omens to discerning eyes, it would behoove us all to heed the skies. Note: title courtesy of Victor Hugo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/4/2009 8:32:00 PM
DEAR Keith, Very vivid great Imagery YOU are Gifted with much Talent ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 4/3/2009 2:44:00 AM
Actually this brings to mind the film 'The Birds', what a nightmare, beware!! Very visual, enjoyed this!! Kindest thoughts your way, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 4/3/2009 1:57:00 AM
The birds were all aflutter here today, just before the storm hit, Keith. Now it is quiet and I'm "the only bird that" cannot sleep! I'm sending you a soup mail. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/2/2009 11:12:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful write. It speaks to the soul of the reader through magnificent imagery. Love the last stanza as it sums of the message of this piece. Very well penned by a gifted poet. Smiles from Lolita
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