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The One Who Survived

Life is... Unending holes. Your pale angelic face Twirling in each corner of home. You died! Feb-06-2016 Written for the contest "The One Who Survived" Sponsored by Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/17/2016 12:40:00 PM
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Rahy, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/19/2016 7:46:00 AM
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Same to you. Hugs, Rahy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 2/15/2016 11:20:00 AM
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Congrats well done xxx
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM
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Thank you Wendy. Hugs, Rahy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/13/2016 3:16:00 AM
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Hi Rahy. You summarized death very nicely with economized words.... Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:48:00 AM
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Thank you Teddy for your kind and encouraging comment. Hugs, Rahy
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Joyce Johnson
Date: 2/11/2016 10:55:00 PM
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Sad, sad. Congratulations on your expression of love and sorrow,so succinctly. Love, Joyce
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:48:00 AM
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Thank you Joyce. I appreciate your visit and your kind comment. Hugs, Rahy
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 2/11/2016 10:26:00 PM
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Hi Rahy, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM
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Thank you Linda. Hugs, Rahy
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/11/2016 9:49:00 PM
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Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Rahy.
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM
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Thanks Upma. Hugs, Rahy
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Eve Roper
Date: 2/11/2016 12:51:00 PM
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Heartfelt. Congratulations on your win!
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM
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Thank you Eve. Hugs, Rahy
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2016 12:39:00 PM
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Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM
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Thank you Sara. I truly enjoyed participating in your contest. I truly appreciate the placement. Hugs, Rahy
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/11/2016 12:07:00 PM
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So true !! Their presence is everlasting !! Well done!
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:46:00 AM
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They are always with us. Thanks for the visit Carrie. Hugs, Rahy
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Elaine George
Date: 2/11/2016 11:52:00 AM
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Congrats on your top honor with this great Cinquain, Rahy.
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM
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Thank you Elaine. Hugs, Rahy
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/11/2016 11:32:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win!
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM
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Thank you Susan. Hugs, Rahy
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/11/2016 10:51:00 AM
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well scribed, rahy.. fine congrats on your win!..huggs
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/16/2016 8:43:00 AM
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Thank you Nette. Hugs, Rahy
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/11/2016 9:55:00 AM
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Congratulations and well done, Rahy.
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/11/2016 10:26:00 AM
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Thank you Lin. So kind of you. Hugs, Rahy
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Luaer Solnox
Date: 2/5/2016 2:43:00 PM
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I like the abruptness... it works well for the theme. Thanks Rahy for the chuckled grin.
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Rahy Hy
Date: 2/11/2016 10:23:00 AM
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Thank you Luaer. Your visit and encouraging comment is highly appreciated. Hugs, Rahy

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