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The One Who Survived

Life is...
Unending holes.
Your pale angelic face
Twirling in each corner of home.
You died!

Feb-06-2016

Written for the contest "The One Who Survived" Sponsored by Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/17/2016 12:40:00 PM Rahy, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/19/2016 7:46:00 AM Same to you. Hugs, Rahy

Wendy Rycroft Date: 2/15/2016 11:20:00 AM Congrats well done xxx Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM Thank you Wendy. Hugs, Rahy

Teddy Kimathi Date: 2/13/2016 3:16:00 AM Hi Rahy. You summarized death very nicely with economized words.... Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:48:00 AM Thank you Teddy for your kind and encouraging comment. Hugs, Rahy

Joyce Johnson Date: 2/11/2016 10:55:00 PM Sad, sad. Congratulations on your expression of love and sorrow,so succinctly. Love, Joyce Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:48:00 AM Thank you Joyce. I appreciate your visit and your kind comment. Hugs, Rahy

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/11/2016 10:26:00 PM Hi Rahy, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM Thank you Linda. Hugs, Rahy

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/11/2016 9:49:00 PM Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Rahy. Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM Thanks Upma. Hugs, Rahy

Eve Roper Date: 2/11/2016 12:51:00 PM Heartfelt. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM Thank you Eve. Hugs, Rahy

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/11/2016 12:39:00 PM Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:47:00 AM Thank you Sara. I truly enjoyed participating in your contest. I truly appreciate the placement. Hugs, Rahy

Carrie Richards Date: 2/11/2016 12:07:00 PM So true !! Their presence is everlasting !! Well done! Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:46:00 AM They are always with us. Thanks for the visit Carrie. Hugs, Rahy

Elaine George Date: 2/11/2016 11:52:00 AM Congrats on your top honor with this great Cinquain, Rahy. Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:45:00 AM Thank you Elaine. Hugs, Rahy

Susan Gentry Date: 2/11/2016 11:32:00 AM Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:44:00 AM Thank you Susan. Hugs, Rahy

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/11/2016 10:51:00 AM well scribed, rahy.. fine congrats on your win!..huggs Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/16/2016 8:43:00 AM Thank you Nette. Hugs, Rahy

Lin Lane Date: 2/11/2016 9:55:00 AM Congratulations and well done, Rahy. Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/11/2016 10:26:00 AM Thank you Lin. So kind of you. Hugs, Rahy

Luaer Solnox Date: 2/5/2016 2:43:00 PM I like the abruptness... it works well for the theme. Thanks Rahy for the chuckled grin. Login to Reply Rahy Hy Date: 2/11/2016 10:23:00 AM Thank you Luaer. Your visit and encouraging comment is highly appreciated. Hugs, Rahy