Rahy Hy Poet Cinquain

The One Who Survived

Life is...
Unending holes.
Your pale angelic face
Twirling in each corner of home.
You died!

Feb-06-2016

Written for the contest "The One Who Survived" Sponsored by Sara Kendrick

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Poet Destroyer A February 17, 2016 at 12:40 PM Rahy, thank you for the kind reply to my comment. Have a nice day. LINDA Rahy Hy February 19, 2016 at 7:46 AM Same to you. Hugs, Rahy

Wendy Rycroft February 15, 2016 at 11:20 AM Congrats well done xxx Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:44 AM Thank you Wendy. Hugs, Rahy

Teddy Kimathi February 13, 2016 at 3:16 AM Hi Rahy. You summarized death very nicely with economized words.... Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thank you Teddy for your kind and encouraging comment. Hugs, Rahy

Joyce Johnson February 11, 2016 at 10:55 PM Sad, sad. Congratulations on your expression of love and sorrow,so succinctly. Love, Joyce Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:48 AM Thank you Joyce. I appreciate your visit and your kind comment. Hugs, Rahy

Poet Destroyer A February 11, 2016 at 10:26 PM Hi Rahy, Congratulations on your awesome win. XOX ~LINDA~ Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:47 AM Thank you Linda. Hugs, Rahy

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2016 at 9:49 PM Very lovely.. congrats on ur great win with this awesome write Rahy. Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:45 AM Thanks Upma. Hugs, Rahy

Eve Roper February 11, 2016 at 12:51 PM Heartfelt. Congratulations on your win! Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:44 AM Thank you Eve. Hugs, Rahy

Sara Kendrick February 11, 2016 at 12:39 PM Thank you for participating in my contest “The One Who Survives”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:47 AM Thank you Sara. I truly enjoyed participating in your contest. I truly appreciate the placement. Hugs, Rahy

Carrie Richards February 11, 2016 at 12:07 PM So true !! Their presence is everlasting !! Well done! Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:46 AM They are always with us. Thanks for the visit Carrie. Hugs, Rahy

Elaine George February 11, 2016 at 11:52 AM Congrats on your top honor with this great Cinquain, Rahy. Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:45 AM Thank you Elaine. Hugs, Rahy

Susan Gentry February 11, 2016 at 11:32 AM Congratulations on your win! Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:44 AM Thank you Susan. Hugs, Rahy

Nette Onclaud February 11, 2016 at 10:51 AM well scribed, rahy.. fine congrats on your win!..huggs Rahy Hy February 16, 2016 at 8:43 AM Thank you Nette. Hugs, Rahy

Lin Lane February 11, 2016 at 9:55 AM Congratulations and well done, Rahy. Rahy Hy February 11, 2016 at 10:26 AM Thank you Lin. So kind of you. Hugs, Rahy

Luaer Solnox February 5, 2016 at 2:43 PM I like the abruptness... it works well for the theme. Thanks Rahy for the chuckled grin. Rahy Hy February 11, 2016 at 10:23 AM Thank you Luaer. Your visit and encouraging comment is highly appreciated. Hugs, Rahy