The One That Got Away

Every year our vacation was always the same. Two
weeks of fishing, playing, eating and being together 
on the river. We had no electricity, no TV, and we 
all loved it. The four cousins had time to get to know 
each other and to just be kids. In the woods, on the river,
building forts and damns, catching frogs, campfires,
and , of course, fishing.
One day, when everyone else had given up and the kids
were playing on the bank, I hooked on to a BIG one.
I started to scream and shout...they all gathered round
to urge me on, give me advise and to share my
glorious moment. My tackle was not rigged for
salmon, but we could soon tell that's what I had.
For at least 15 minutes I was a star, playing that
fish, back and forth, until he was close to the
bank and we could see that he was a monster..
a big reddish salmon. 
My niece, who was about 10, jumped into the
water to help me land him, and then, disaster struck.
He spit the hook, flashed his tail, and off he swam.
We all stood there in stunned silence..not knowing
whether to laugh of cry. I did a bit of each.
The story has become the stuff of legends, the story of
Aunti/Mom and the "one that got away"..really, its 
more the story of the bond of family and times that 
were so precious. 

For the One That Got Away contest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/4/2011 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win : ) Jack
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Date: 4/4/2011 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Barbara for the contest "The one that got away" sponsored by Thvia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:11:00 PM
wonderful write to keep present a great memory! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 4/2/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of Thvia, Barbara
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Date: 4/2/2011 2:59:00 AM
Delightful story, Barbara. I love all these precious moments that bind families together for generations to come. Thank you for sharing. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:32:00 AM
Congrats, loved this first time around. Harry
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Date: 4/2/2011 12:01:00 AM
yeah, the family ending is what makes it a grea t poem for me Barbara......liked all the suspense an d humour woven into the story too....congratulations and my bes t wishes....Syd
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Date: 4/1/2011 10:42:00 PM
What a cute story and you told it with suspense. Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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Date: 4/1/2011 9:56:00 PM
A beautiful legend this is BG. many congrats .
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Date: 4/1/2011 8:58:00 PM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in Thvia's contest with this awesome write and elegant entry on the theme.. enjoy another great win with luv.. happy weekend too..
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Date: 3/30/2011 9:02:00 AM
a great write and fish story, enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 3/29/2011 2:44:00 PM
Your "fish tale" is right up my alley, Barbara. Really would have liked to watch this happening! I know the enthusiasm everyone shares when a big fish is on the hook. Too bad it got away. I entered the older poem about the Tiger Shark that got away, taking all the line off my reel with him. Well, she said we could write about fish! This is definitely one for my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:28:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative poetry today as always Barbara. The best to you in the contest. Have a wonderful day and may you find even more inspiration to write as the day goes by. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/28/2011 8:04:00 PM
Enjoyed this wonderful nostalgic poem, Barbara, love the sentiment of the family bonding. good luck in the contest. Harry
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Date: 3/28/2011 7:36:00 PM
always good to read about family happenings Barbara, good future's comes forth from here.
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