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The one she hated was herself

She had a heart As cold as ice She had battles with everyone That came into her life She would say a nice word Every now and then But afterwards she Would be ripping of your head Hard to please Hard to talk to She didn't have friends Enemies quite a few We often thought If she hated us By the way she went If we made a hiccup But soon we began to realise The one she hated Was herself Deep down inside But by then it was too late As the devil was waiting For her at hells gate Her battles was An internal one She never meant to Cause nobody harm Just herself.

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Date: 6/9/2025 11:18:00 AM
Hello Arsa, This poem is very sad. It is nice to meet you. Enjoy your dxay my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 6/9/2025 6:31:00 AM
Hello Ansa, this is beautifully written and very touching. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, fellow poet.
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Date: 6/5/2025 11:01:00 PM
I don't think it's ever too late to save oneself. God is compassionate and would go for the lost sheep, no matter what.
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Date: 6/5/2025 4:11:00 PM
Very well written. Congratulations
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