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The One Call I Missed

Why did you lie to me?
You said you would call
Still I wait here by the phone
This is not how it's meant to be
I feel like I have been a fool
Are you the one who steals my heart?
You say I am the one for you
One who cares would not treat me this way
As I wait I fall too sleep
In the morn I will not care
I will search for my loved one
Do not call I will thrive on my own
Sad is not the way to be
This is how to write a poem with just one.
It is hard to write this way.

For the One to one contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/30/2014 3:47:00 PM
Richard This is a poem filled with all kinds of emotion. Hope, faith, sadness, loneliness, longing, and heartache. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Web Of Love poem.
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Date: 4/27/2013 9:08:00 PM
It's hard to stick to strict rules when writing. You've done it so well. The proof, I didn't realize that it was the one syllable rule until I read some of the posts. :) She is the one who missed out. Her loss. Great poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/27/2013 9:36:00 PM
Thanks I enjoyed the challenge. I won by having created something new.
Date: 1/17/2013 6:14:00 PM
no credit,bad connection,lol,great write Richard,wishing you the best in the contest
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2013 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Richard.
Date: 1/17/2013 3:05:00 PM
Thanks so much Rich for stopping by my writes. This is a bit sad I hope you are OK? Light & Love
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Date: 1/17/2013 9:16:00 AM
you make it look so easy Richard, the syllables may not be there, but the poetry sure is....
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2013 9:32:00 AM
Thanks Harry, what a nice thing to say. Have a great day my friend.
Date: 1/17/2013 2:27:00 AM
I applaud you with the one syllable word poem. I had zero faith in my ability to do this when I saw the contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2013 6:15:00 AM
A bit to restrictive for my likes.
Date: 1/16/2013 8:56:00 PM
Wooww, Rick, this is dramatically deep, hopefully "the one" will call you soon :D - hug, yanny
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/17/2013 6:13:00 AM
She never called and she wasn't the one so all is well.