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Art is subjective. Critics are selective. I want to be that person. But not one whose poems are cliches rehearsing. The one whose poems are more than just rhymes The one whose poems are more than just lines. The one who writes about the rays of a sunset The one who writes of how much they have regret. But I find myself constantly needing to rhyme. And my poems not taking much time. To write I mean of course. And i just can't figure out the source. My poems just flow out of me so adolescently. It makes me fear that that is all people will see. Adolescence and cliche filled lines. Maybe these are the signs. To give up on a little dream. To no longer let these poems be more than they seem.

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Date: 2/21/2018 7:15:00 PM
If you like rhymes then write rhymes, if you want to change then maybe write rhymes and change the line length so the rhyme occurs at odd places. nice thoughts :)
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Date: 2/15/2018 3:38:00 PM
Any help just ask.. My poem simple love, is pretty easy to understand and is in free verse style... Prose and narrative are also poems that may help..
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Janet Freeman
Date: 2/15/2018 3:41:00 PM
I will look into those now! Thank you
Date: 2/15/2018 3:30:00 PM
Might be a good idea to read free verse poetry by other poets on here.. That normally helps..
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Janet Freeman
Date: 2/15/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thank you I will do that. Some of the poems on here are extremely dense. Makes it hard to understand what the point is to them. I feel like some of these are just too much. But there is a few that are really good and take a more straight forward approach than dancing around a subject
Date: 2/15/2018 2:52:00 PM
I went through this phase of my poems rhyming all the time!!! Funny thing is all my early poems were free verse... I write my poems very quickly also..
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Janet Freeman
Date: 2/15/2018 3:05:00 PM
I just feel like I can't write a poem without making it rhyme because then it ends up more like a short story. Makes me feel like I am just a child all the time writing silly things that no one will appreciate

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