The Ondine

In reservoirs, far underground,
where stalagmites are sometimes found.
In lakes and ponds and puddled pools,
in mist and marsh and snow that cools,
I hide beside my sisters. 

In issuing springs that sparkle bright,
on stony slopes of shade and light, 
to flowing streams that twist and turn, 
past meadow banks of grass and fern,
I glide beside my sisters. 

In river reach with rippling flow
‘tween rush and reed I always go,
to delta mouths both deep and wide,
which seas contest at every tide,
to glide beside my sisters.

In raging rapids torrents race,
or waterfall’s tumultuous pace,
in storm lashed seas, which crash and break,
on shingle shores that white waves rake,
I ride beside my sisters.

And who am I that rides so free, 
who glides and hides so easily;
a mermaid in the salty sea,
a naiad or a white kelpie?
A water nymph you just might see,
me ride, beside my sisters.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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April 5, 2015 at 10:04 PM
David, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Have yourself a Happy Easter Love LINDA
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February 28, 2015 at 8:52 PM
David, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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March 1, 2015 at 1:21 AM
Thank you Linda... I really appreciate the wonderful supportive comments from those I have so far connected with on this website. Although an writer and author, poetry to date has not figured highly on my pursuits, although I do love it. I hope this site helps foster my interest.
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February 27, 2015 at 9:55 PM
David, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 28, 2015 at 1:26 AM
Thanks Skat.. it has been a revelation finding this site and the wonderful community is brought together here. I have enjoyed greatly reading other people's poems including yours, which touch some very powerful emotions. We can get to know people through their poetry and the themes, which inspire them. :)
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February 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM
great flow, great rhyme and the fluidity of thoughts.. :) imagery is a wow!! all in all, splendid write!!.. As I read your poems, you are teaching me new words.. :) thanks much!! my belated Welcome here in Poetrysoup!.. :) I am humbled that you read and comment to my poems as see I am learner of all these still.. :)! God bless!....// olive eloisa,
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February 25, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Loved this, David, and was completely unfamiliar with Ondine until now, had to google some factoids to get grounded. A blaring 7, my friend, felt like I was riding the waves alongside them.
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February 26, 2015 at 2:36 AM
Thanks for this... am delighted you enjoyed the poem and greatly appreciate the score :)
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February 25, 2015 at 9:05 AM
You may be new to poetrysoup but you are not new to writing poetry, well done my poetic friend and welcome to poetrysoup
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February 25, 2015 at 12:39 PM
Thanks Frederic... I am touched and many thanks for the feedback.
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February 25, 2015 at 7:02 AM
Wow a beautifully described poem perusing great imagery... nad
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February 25, 2015 at 12:40 PM
Thanks Poesy, for your kind thoughts. This theme touches something deep within me and I hope I have done it justice :)
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February 24, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Great imagery. Sweet lilting rhyme. Welcome to PoetrySoup, David. For your first poem, a 7 from me. Smiles. KIM :D
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February 24, 2015 at 6:34 AM
Thanks Kim... how kind. Quite an adventure joining PoetrysSoup. I'm just feeling my way at the moment :)
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