The Old Year

The old year is gone
You say
Dead as leaf fallen
Under a barren tree
Dead
And still mulching roots
Of new growing
Things
Dead and still
Nurturing continuities 
A breast in the mouth
Of bitter hunger
No hand can remove

How is a thing gone
And yet remain
To corrupt everything
Every new dream is a fruit
Of old ambition
Every ambition
Has a stalk of pain
Nothing dies
Until memory is lost
And memory
Is not the frost
In the sun.

My order is disheveled
Contemplating time
The root 
Of all mortality
While I
Like an old year past
Away
And be dead
When no one remembers
For the ash
Without the ember
Is dust in the wind
The forest
Fragile as love again.

The old year is gone
Dead you say
The river flows
And never comes back
In tears or in rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/4/2010 5:16:00 PM
Dear L'nass, Your poem reaches the depths of the soul, unrestrained by mundane concepts of what is expected of an uncertain future conceived by all. This is a work of art, with a part of you dwelling within it, coloring it in brilliant shades. Thank you for your lovely message. Connie
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Date: 1/2/2010 3:28:00 PM
OMG, L'nass! Wise poet, deep thinker! Profound write! Awesome! Peace, Audrey
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