The Old Willow

Six feet under the old willow
Worms and maggots eat away
At our love, or was it hate
I can't really say

On his flesh dancing demons dine
Under that old willow
Dust and bone blowing away
All our love, or was it hate
I can't really say

Lay a rose
That will soon wilt away
Escape in my grotesque prose
While you rot away
Six feet under the old willow
Nothing more shall grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:56 AM
What a wonderful day I am having sitting here reading such amazing poetry. I am glad yours is amongst the ones I have enjoyed reading today Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing it. I hope you have a very inspirational weekend. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 9:20 AM
Very descriptive writing here. This is impressive.
Clark Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 5:56 AM
To describe our demise in such a way is exceptional. Nice job
Elizabeth Avatar
February 10, 2012 at 6:02 AM
thank you :)
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