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The Old Rusty Gate

That old rusty gate, goes way back in time 
It's body of metal holds memories 
Through the hinges and spindles- Ivy climb 
Almost hidden from the thick leafy trees 

The gate still swings in the wind of a day 
Do the ghosts of the house; past- come and go 
If that old gate could talk, what would it say? 
In its squeaky voice- "I've seen the wind blow" 

It out-lived the house, still standing alone 
It holds memories of a hundred years 
Tulips of color and roses- once grown 
If the gate had eyes- it would shed some tears 

The gates still alive, though rust grasps its face 
Don't think, it ever, wants out of that place 


One In Five Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Joseph May  
7-2-2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 9/9/2022 10:31:00 PM
Love this one Charlie enjoyed so much to read. You brought that Old rusty gate alive with emotions. Well done my friend. A pleasure to read... Be blessed...my friend...
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Charles Messina
Date: 9/10/2022 6:16:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on this one, Michael, this is one of my personal favorites. (Soupmail). Have a great weekend...so much appreciate you! Charlie
Date: 8/6/2022 5:18:00 AM
Wow this is excellent Charlie! Such a nostalgic poem. Your imagery brought me right there to "The Old Rusty Gate" I'm saving this to my faves. Love it! :-)
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Date: 7/12/2022 9:44:00 AM
Charlie! Welcome back! Have missed you my friend. So wonderful to see this poem of intriguing mystery on the winners list! I love your ending. There is something so enduring about the past life of this gate that wants to hold on even in the future - even without the house. Nicely penned! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/12/2022 8:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write/story. An old house and an old gate go together. Have a blessed day.......................
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Date: 7/11/2022 8:19:00 PM
Beauty of the gate though rusted. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/11/2022 4:29:00 PM
The rusty gate stands as a sentinel of the past, Very nicely penned Charles, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/11/2022 12:39:00 PM
I love the notion that a rusty old gate might have cherished memories, Charles. A worthy win. Congratulations. Terry
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Date: 7/2/2022 10:13:00 AM
Ah, this is lovely, Charles. I've seen this so many times back in the hills when the old folks die off and leave the house to ruins with no heirs or no one who wants it. This is also a fine metaphor for those of us living through our last years. Beautifully-written, my friend.
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Date: 7/2/2022 5:45:00 AM
I just love this one. Awesome writing. Hope it wins. God bless you. Love, Gina
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