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The Old Rustic

The old rustic cabin by the lake is made with wood for goodness sake. Each morning I see the old rustic boat in the dock ready to float. There are fish to be caught I take the old boat out hopefully to catch mighty trout. The old rustic boat moves with grace knowing it needs a new face. But for God sake it has a good pace. My old rustic body moves with grace, no worrying if someday my memory will be erased. My rustic old cabin will disappear one day. My old rustic boat will no longer float. My rustic old body will turn into ashes and dust. My rustic old soul will certainly grow and be very, very old to see the seeds grow that I have sown.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 5/5/2016 1:58:00 AM
RHONDA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. --SKAT
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Date: 4/20/2016 3:31:00 AM
Rhonda Clapper, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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