The Old Rocking Chair

The old rocking chair slowly rocks with the breeze on the porch of the empty farmhouse, waiting for new stories to be told.


Heidi Sands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 7, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Oh nicely done Heidi. Very descriptive and wonderful imagery. A seven from me. JB
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November 7, 2016 at 12:57 PM
Thanks Judy! I appreciate that.
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November 7, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Yes with breeze in empty farm. Lovely.
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November 7, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Thank you :)
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November 7, 2016 at 8:54 AM
This is so beautiful Heidi. The scene you have created, the feelings of happiness and time, in such a short piece are amazing. I absolutely loved this.
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November 7, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Chris, I am happy to hear you love this short one! :) Thank you.
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November 7, 2016 at 8:51 AM
I love this!
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November 7, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Awesome! Happy to hear that, Mike! :)
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November 7, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Hi Heidi, In a few words you said so much. Nice imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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November 7, 2016 at 7:42 AM
Hi Alexis. Thank you ! Have a nice day :)
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