The Old Redbud Tree

The Old Redbud Tree There is a gnarled redbud left standing, It blossomed pink year after year; Four fused trunks grew from its base, Its heart-shaped leaves said “dear.” A new branch grew from one, making five, The little tree was oh, so proud of its size, And for decades it did healthy look, Until one year one branch snapped and died. It seemed to cry with its new-found gnarl, But soldiered on with only four. Another branch bent its head and broke, Then fell to its earthly floor. Now there were three and twisted they, Its heart-shaped leaves near gone, The wind blew two from the old redbud tree, Now one reaches lonely for the sun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/30/2017 9:08:00 AM
Very descriptive and well written. Great write!.............Pat
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Date: 4/25/2017 6:53:00 PM
Lovely even though sad.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 11:00:00 AM
I love my trees! I know what you mean!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/26/2017 11:00:00 AM
I love my trees! I know what you mean!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/26/2017 9:52:00 AM
When you live in one place a long time, your trees become personified. Thank you, Kim.
Date: 4/24/2017 5:55:00 PM
Sun, this was so beautifully penned, I wanted to weep for the old redbud tree, A7
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/26/2017 9:49:00 AM
I do appreciate your gracious comment and the 7!
Date: 4/23/2017 8:17:00 PM
What a both delightful and moving story that echoes in many ways the story of our lives as families' expand and then, in later years, contract, and there is just one left reaching "lonely for the sun":) Amitiés
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Date: 4/23/2017 6:21:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive word choices that open the minds eye to envision your thoughts. I liked the poem as a good read, your use of colorful images adds to the charm and the depth of this work. Emile.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/24/2017 5:52:00 PM
Thank you, Emile.
Date: 4/23/2017 5:12:00 AM
What poetry, promise, & prophecy - the Promise is that when all have gone, One remains. Real TREES of LIFE never die. I did my morning devotions ... off to church ... LORD said go to my daughter, Sunlite SW - and talk about visiting me & I will meet her. Shalom Dear SW. Keep writing philosophy from the Power that rules all
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/24/2017 5:51:00 PM
So nice of you to take time to comment on your busy Sunday morning!
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