The Old Redbud Tree

The Old Redbud Tree There is a gnarled redbud left standing, It blossomed pink year after year; Four fused trunks grew from its base, Its heart-shaped leaves said “dear.” A new branch grew from one, making five, The little tree was oh, so proud of its size, And for decades it did healthy look, Until one year one branch snapped and died. It seemed to cry with its new-found gnarl, But soldiered on with only four. Another branch bent its head and broke, Then fell to its earthly floor. Now there were three and twisted they, Its heart-shaped leaves near gone, The wind blew two from the old redbud tree, Now one reaches lonely for the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Adams Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Very descriptive and well written. Great write!.............Pat
Rodrigues Avatar
April 25, 2017 at 6:53 PM
Lovely even though sad.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 11:00 AM
I love my trees! I know what you mean!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 11:00 AM
I love my trees! I know what you mean!
Wanter Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:52 AM
When you live in one place a long time, your trees become personified. Thank you, Kim.
La France Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Sun, this was so beautifully penned, I wanted to weep for the old redbud tree, A7
Wanter Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 9:49 AM
I do appreciate your gracious comment and the 7!
Coreggia Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 8:17 PM
What a both delightful and moving story that echoes in many ways the story of our lives as families' expand and then, in later years, contract, and there is just one left reaching "lonely for the sun":) Amitiés
Pinet Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 6:21 PM
Wonderful descriptive word choices that open the minds eye to envision your thoughts. I liked the poem as a good read, your use of colorful images adds to the charm and the depth of this work. Emile.
Wanter Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Thank you, Emile.
Deo Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 5:12 AM
What poetry, promise, & prophecy - the Promise is that when all have gone, One remains. Real TREES of LIFE never die. I did my morning devotions ... off to church ... LORD said go to my daughter, Sunlite SW - and talk about visiting me & I will meet her. Shalom Dear SW. Keep writing philosophy from the Power that rules all
Wanter Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:51 PM
So nice of you to take time to comment on your busy Sunday morning!
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