The Old Piano

She sits lost in her even keel 
without a solitary sound 
without a note that you can steal 
a piano, bolted to the ground 

wallpaper secrets bona fide
atop old keys restrained of spiel 
ancient solos, yesterday's chide 
with every broken note she peels 

her golden  voice it aims to heal   
alas her fingers  cannot play
so as her heart begins to feel    
the piano gongs with no allay 

She hoped for better days ahead
but piano sits without appeal  
tonality of aria now long dead 
she had the song, but not the feel.   

Jan. 22, 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/23/2020 10:43:00 PM
Great description of the picture my friend, good luck in the contest. hugs
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Date: 1/22/2020 3:12:00 PM
Interesting and it made me think... How many are like that.... If we do not feel how do we express? Just like in poetry... Great poem my friend.
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Date: 1/22/2020 6:27:00 PM
I for one am glad my heart still feels Silent One, and I know yours does too, thank you for reading,
Date: 1/22/2020 11:54:00 AM
Like most of us, you must have heard someone sing a song with absolutely no comprehension of the lyrics, like a piano student plays the notes with no understanding of tremor! Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/22/2020 6:27:00 PM
If it doesn't reach the heart it does not matter, well said Rico, thanks for stopping by,
Date: 1/22/2020 8:06:00 AM
Sad and you gave this story mood and texture. This hits all the right notes.
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Date: 1/22/2020 6:26:00 PM
Thank you Richard, Good to see you on my page, glad you enjoyed the piano and the singer.
Date: 1/22/2020 7:37:00 AM
The old piano gave voice to her in your poem--sad but real life.
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Date: 1/22/2020 6:25:00 PM
Yes Vijay, a loyal piano standing at her side, absorbing all her feelings and unsung songs. Thank you for reading my poetry,
Date: 1/22/2020 3:47:00 AM
what a melancholy poem Pixie, made me think of someone with dementia:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/22/2020 6:25:00 PM
Yes often the luminous years of our life can be diminished through loss of memory, Its the most prized possession we own dear Jan, Thanks for reading.
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