The Old Orphan

The Old Orphan 
           here he came in need of love 
          sadly,he found himself orphan 
         it was the wish of the one above 
         like a musician without his organ 

        he felt a small baby inside his chest
        he searched for his beloved toy 
        he found it ... No, not yet
       couldn't brook weeping though
 
       he brought her picture out
       took his time looking at her eyes
       his heart by her name shout
       he couldn't forget her voice nor her smiles
 
       at last he joined her in peace down deep 
      under the four seasons they sleep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/5/2015 5:03:00 PM
beautiful emotional write - i did like the explanation behind why you wrote this poem may they forever be at peace
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Date: 7/6/2015 7:49:00 PM
Thank you my friend for such sweet comment
Date: 6/24/2015 11:23:00 PM
I love to read what is real, good write, a 7 hugs eve
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:23:00 AM
The real best thing that happened to me is knowing you and the rest of the ones who supported me
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:18:00 AM
Date: 6/21/2015 1:52:00 AM
My pleasure, good night.
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Date: 6/20/2015 11:23:00 PM
This one bends the mind!
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Date: 6/21/2015 12:27:00 AM
Really ! Wow I didn't think it would Thanks for your time reading my writings
Date: 6/18/2015 1:24:00 PM
Very poetic n poignant. Fantastic poem content. Many lines rhyme so nicely. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Date: 6/18/2015 2:06:00 PM
All thanks to you dear for these encouraging words And it is my honor to read some of your writings
Date: 6/16/2015 10:37:00 PM
Every time I pass by the garden which is next to the cemetery I used to see an old man sitting on a chair holding a picture of his beloved dead wife in his hand and now his is next to her
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