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The Old Man In the Park

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Senryu is an unrhymed Japanese form much like Haiku but it has a humanities theme instead of a nature theme.It records the essence of a moment and consists of three lines. 5/7/5

Every day, same time, He comes alone to sit there. Quietly feeds birds.

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/9/2016 8:40:00 AM
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- I think I know this man, Judy - Great written - Maybe you'll meet him in my poem: "- All Know Peter Daim, The Invisible Man -" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Judy Ball
Date: 6/9/2016 8:51:00 AM
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Thank you so much Anne-Lise. I'll look for him. Glad you like this. God Bless, JB

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