The Old Man In the Park

He dressed up his best old shirt 
As the sun was just showing her face 
Another walk for his constitution 
Amongst the human race 
The park was beginning to come alive 
With shouts from the softball field 
As he reached inside his faded shirt pocket 
And retrieved a half smoked Chesterfield 
Ah, the music of the songbirds that sang 
And the smell of someone’s apple pie 
And the soaring fowl overhead in the air 
As they glided through the cloudless sky 
He loved this place on Sunday mornings 
When players came from all over to play 
And once he was among these ranks 
But that’s another story for another day 
Some think of him as a homeless case 
And some even says he’s no good at all  
But he remembers and smiles with glee 
Of the time he stood straight and tall 
He traveled across that big old pond 
But a snipers bullet cut him down in Nam 
Although he lived, he forgets sometimes 
He’s no longer attached to Uncle Sam 
Still, he walks this same old walk 
And sits on that park bench for a while 
He then goes back to yesteryears 
And stays there for awhile

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/24/2014 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I was just sitting around with nothing to do and up popped some words and they just fell onto the page. Thanks a million.
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Date: 3/23/2014 7:14:00 PM
This is a wonderful piece will ...So many of our veterans are out there unnoticed...I really enjoyed this....Tim
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