The Old Man Cries

A big old oak tree we fondly call
"The old man" stands in our backyard.
He watches over us and all we do,
a hundred years he's been standing guard.

Like tears his leaves begin to fall,
they start to cover the ground.
The old man softly cries, winter,
his tears fall all around.

He has no more tears left to shed and
"The old man" looks sad standing there.
His outstretched branches are like spindly
fingers of limbs that now are so bare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ajmal Avatar
March 8, 2018 at 7:58 AM
From reading your this poem and your latest one, I assume that you re a nature lover, I m I right, rhis was yet another great poem of yours, don t worry the leaves shall again came back in spring and it will be full of happiness (greenery )
Blanca Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Deb, don't feel sorry for a tree for the best parts are underground. I've always felt trees are my friends.
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