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The Old Jalopy

In the scrapyard
Abandoned and forlorn
Sunburned lackluster paint
Scavengers’ delight
Headlights dashboard fins
Leather seats and
Glistening rims long gone

Nothing to do but reminisce
The glory of hey days
Top down cruising the boulevard
Miles and miles of sun and valley
That was then and this is now
Kicking back and resting
Sadly waiting for the crusher



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~RANDOM MUSINGS VOL.1~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on March 15, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE G sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 2ND
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 4:17 PM
Line, the crusher can't take away our memories, thankfully. This one took me way back... haven't heard a car called a Jalopy in many moons (except for Sam Kauffman's "Jalopy Memories" which I recommend heartily) Congrats! ~ John
Gauthier Avatar
March 16, 2020 at 8:12 PM
Thanks, John. It was originally written for a "jalopy" contest.
Mcguire Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 11:27 PM
That was then this is now! So true Miss Line
Gauthier Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 6:26 AM
The golden years. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Even the jalopy must expire...
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Nothing lasts forever. Thanks for dropping by, Kim.
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