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The Old Home

The Old Home      

                 in the process of becoming.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015
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Skat A
Date: 3/9/2015 4:53:00 PM
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I love it. SKAT
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James Fraser
Date: 1/16/2015 1:42:00 PM
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Nice one Sara, nail on head hit bang on, James :)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 1/15/2015 4:17:00 AM
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Another excellent one!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/14/2015 2:37:00 PM
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- So true, Sara - // Anne-Lise :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 1/13/2015 7:05:00 PM
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I like it Sara hugs
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Cherl Dunn
Date: 1/13/2015 12:21:00 PM
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Love the painting, and the poem is interesting, cheri
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/12/2015 6:36:00 PM
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hey you did not have this as monoku before, did you? I was wondering if my suggestion is the reason it's monoku! but maybe you already called it by that form.
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 1/12/2015 3:28:00 PM
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You constantly amaze me at the depth your thoughts can reach with only a few words.
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Hamida Yamin
Date: 1/12/2015 2:48:00 PM
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Hi Sara! An amazing short poem. You are clever with your pen and know how to use it. Regards. -Hamida
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/11/2015 4:33:00 PM
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I meant to say monoku
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/11/2015 4:32:00 PM
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Are you saying this one has yet to be written. I actually like it as a really short poem!! It is like a monku about a house being refinished!!!
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