The Old Barn

In barren fields where once was grown Golden wheat in springtime sown Still stands the barn from long ago The ravages of years it's foe For seasons of neglect atone The whims of natures force are shown Within it's walls her voice well known Once proud timbers forced to bow In barren fields But yet it stands on feet of stone With faded walls and weathered tone Staunch against the winters blow Remembering still the plow and hoe Abandoned it now dwells alone In barren fields
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 173" Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 8:23 AM
Thank you
May Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 4:56 PM
congrats on your win Bob
Quigley Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Joseph
Guzzi Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 3:33 PM
I live with this..beauty and sadness surrounding me ..the remnants of an 1890's farm. Perhaps you'd like my verse The Corn Crib Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Quigley Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 8:15 AM
We both live in areas steeped in yesterday. It is only for us to see it.
Caulfield Avatar
April 29, 2012 at 6:37 PM
Very nice poem. i think it would be fun to remake the barn into a place of enchantment, don't you?
Quigley Avatar
April 30, 2012 at 8:17 AM
Sounds like a good idea to me Peggy. Thanks for visiting my Barn.
Andresen Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 2:41 PM
I like the way you written Bob, nostalgic and meaningful poem. - Have a lovely weekend Bob. - oxox Anne-Lise
Quigley Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 2:49 PM
Thank you Anne Lise. Very kind of you to comment.
Onclaud Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 11:16 AM
a sense of solitude permeates through your deep lines, bob... so refreshingly poignant..:) huggss!
Quigley Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 2:49 PM
Thank you Nette
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