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Written, May 27, 2024
Contest, “B” – Types of Forms – Blank Verse
Sponsor, Constance La France

Over the waters blue, the night winds sigh, the breakers roar.” _ by Lord Byron Beneath the moon, Earth's living oceans breathe with pulsing tides and swells that rise and fall. The iridescent blues on rolling waves add mystery, as night winds echo sighs. Large breakers roar and crash upon the shore as gusty winds push forward frothy waves- displaying unleashed power over land; a force that dominates beyond control. So like another world, our oceans seem- with depths to places down below huge waves; where creatures large and small in secret worlds explore their universe- to us unknown. What lies beneath of life we've never seen or life that was- now buried deep below where land was once- but seized by ocean's might; commanders of this Earth- these oceans are. Beyond our skies- unknowns bemuse our minds; neath ocean waves rests knowledge still to come. On land, we in the middle share a loss in finding answers to these mysteries.

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Date: 6/25/2024 7:05:00 AM
Sandra, congratulations on your win in my contest, love your poem, the image, and chosen quote, Constance
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2024 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for my nice placement and uplifting comments. I enjoyed writing for your contest! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/28/2024 8:24:00 AM
Dear Sandra, Your poem is mesmerizing. The imagery of the ocean's power and mystery is beautifully evocative. I loved how you intertwined the force of the waves with the unknown depths, capturing the essence of beauty and enigma. Your writing truly transports me the reader to another world—absolutely stunning work. - Blessings, Daniel
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2024 6:01:00 PM
Once again, Daniel, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your very uplifting and encouraging comments. You are very kind! Sandra :)
Date: 5/28/2024 2:05:00 AM
Such beautiful poetry Sandra, loved this.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 7/2/2024 6:02:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur. I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem, and I appreciate your lovely comment. Sandra

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