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The ocean lives- both fast and slow- a rolling force that hunts the shore; it gallops high, then tip-toes low, forever spreading- seeking more. The ocean lives- by currents fed, and moon that rules its shifting tides; or, by a hurricane is led to venture far inland, it rides. The ocean lives- beneath the sun, as glistened waves weave up and down; then nightly moonbeams dance and stun like jewels on a flowing gown. The ocean lives- a thoroughfare that brings us to another land for pleasure or supplies somewhere, by ships that follow its command. The ocean lives- another world, some depths of which are still unknown; and species yet to be unfurled- for all of life- a cornerstone. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Devotion To Ocean Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke Judged: 08/15/2019 /em>

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Date: 8/16/2019 6:28:00 PM
Yes, the ocean is another world that you captured perfectly. congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/16/2019 3:16:00 AM
- Beautiful waves ... lovely written, Sandra - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/15/2019 10:00:00 PM
Great, Sandra, congratulation on your wonderful win! Hugs
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Date: 8/15/2019 4:31:00 PM
Your poem is gorgeous Sandra! Congratulations on your deserving silver medal! It is a gold medal winner for me and I am putting it into my Faves! : ) xxoo
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Date: 8/8/2019 8:33:00 PM
Lovely said my friend...ready for a win...^WW^ :o)
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