The Ocean Ghosts


A buoy calling me to the green sea
I can't move her wild channel, like my ebbs
from within, my God, may this bracing cease

of cold months past thaw, spill breathing again
the seagull in the ice air blew away
I can't move her wild channel, like my ebbs

a seaweed frozen to wind in the spray
other footprints passing where there were mine
the seagull in the ice air blew away

an ocean that cannot melt my goodbye
on water my skin like fog beating through
other footprints passing where there were mine

where the rip current gets all things too soon
the memory of these fingers thrashing 
on water; my skin like fog beating through

the dark thud against me still, still splashing
a buoy calling me to the green sea
with a thousand others never watching
from within, my God, may this bracing cease
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Croft Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 4:18 AM
a beautiful terzanelle, I've never experimented with this form.
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 9:10 PM
Wow great terzannelle, Paige. So what happened with all your poetry pages? Why take down so many poems with comments to them??;
George Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 10:01 PM
Sorry to see the bulk of your poems deleted, dear Paige. Hope you can recover them. Glad you are back with a handful of new poems. This is so profound with arresting imagery.
Hind Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 10:20 PM
I had made the decision to leave PoetrySoup and deleted them, but couldn't stay away- this site is therapy for me and I am lost and unhappy and alone without it. I'm back. Thanks for your sweet words. <3
Jones Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 8:42 PM
Passionate! I admire your ability to write in this form!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 8:18 AM
"The Ocean Ghosts" is a wonderful write/story from the first line to the last line. I write my work on an e-mail, then send it to myself, then put it in a Soup file. That way I have everything together.  Have a very blessed day writing away..........
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 5:58 AM
Very nice, Paige. Love the frozen imagery and your call out to God. Fave
Daniels Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 9:17 PM
This is a Masterpiece comeback, dearest Paige. It speaks to & for the many traversing the cold & dark within to comeback renewed. The imagery of the buoy, the seagull in the ice air, are evidence that your consciousness is seeing the Light at end, where the ocean melts & a part of it is soaring. I do trust you have your own copies of what was removed here, & that you will reshare some time. Love for your courage, Ghairo.
Godwin Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:24 PM
When I clicked over here and saw you had deleted your work my heart rate accelerated and then also stilled when I read this poem, felt the imagery. Trying to work thru your creative lines for meaning about what's going on with you is maybe not relevant and / or helpful? The feel in the poem is hard to shake off, and it is a thick gray after my breath - to me. What's up, down and going around?
Hind Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:37 PM
I was going off the soup for good, but came back. I need to be here; so isolated without writing. Many hours of work, gone, but hopefully my muse will take me on different journeys... thanks, CayCay. <3
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