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The Ocean

The Ocean When he heard, I had been a seafarer he wanted to know about the ocean, “write it down for me,” he said...What nerve. The ocean has many colours one of them is blue, sometimes it is like a mud and often it is black with shattering of greenness like a spring day in the Alps. There are times when it a watery Swiss, enormous white topped waves bearing down on your ship that shudders like a wet dog and only nuns keep their calm they have lived a chaste life and expect to be handed a pair of wings should things go wrong. There the is golden morning ocean, that blinks like a million golden ducats are floating on its silky surface, not to forget the moon casting its dark mystic upon the ocean trying to drag you into its strange mysteriousness. I could not tell him this because at the time I was thinking of being in an oak forest chasing squirrels and raiding their larders of nuts.

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Date: 4/14/2015 6:10:00 AM
An awesome poem with fascinating twists n turns, descriptive muse that flowed in a splendid freeverse, like the ocean. The terms and phrasing and the comparisons makes it a great read indeed. And i luv squirrels so i enjoyd how u wrote of them in the last lines. Kudos. Pls do review my latest poem too.
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