The Obscure Little Poetess

The obscure little poetess 
Leans forward in front of her screen
Her fingers fly over the keys
As she writes up her little dreams

Each tiny key that she presses
With her butterfly touches, light
Brings to life her deepest feelings
On her computer screen so bright

She pauses for just a moment
And gazes at her pink flowers
She wonders if her words will bring
Those needed refreshing showers

She looks inside her little heart
And searches with all of her might
Trying to find the hidden words
That will make her rhyme just right

She’s lost in her own perfect world
Filled with such beauty and delight
A change from her hideous world
That is filled with demons of night

Sometimes on these same little keys
A lonely tear or two will fall
But she quickly wipes them away
As she hears her fantasies call
                                                           
In this place filled with desire
She can be a princess or queen
With someone who just adores her
Who makes love to her every dream

She creates the most perfect place
Where love never dies or betrays
Where all is just goodness and light
For the sun never sets for days

She hides in this make believe land
From the cruel truths of her life
It’s where serenity abides
For there’s no horror, nor any strife 

In her sweet little reverie
In her enchanted world of rhyme
She’s once more who she used to be
A blooming woman in her prime.

This is a repost of one of my earlier writes. Yes, I think I've come a long way! :)
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Callus Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 5:53 AM
The world of make-believe is ours to live in under self-made conditions. There we are free to change the rules and play the game our way. I was still not around on Soup when the obscure little poetess started posting, but I do know the blooming woman in her prime:) hugs // paul
Breidenthal Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 1:21 AM
Another fantastic poem! I really love the 7th stanza. Glad to see you you reposting! That's really cool! I'm going to check out some of your older poems on your page. Always, Laura
La France Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Eileen, oh this is outstanding, it could be me because I am the same as the poet you describe, lost in my poems-gossamer, a terrific 7 and thanks for visiting my poetry
Muideen Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 4:01 PM
Your descriptive swim smoothly in the heart of the readers..........A.M.
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 12:53 PM
Thanks so much, Afolabi. I've been away for a while. I hope to catch up soon.
Trifiatis Avatar
July 18, 2015 at 12:23 PM
Walking through the alleys of your poetry on can admire the ability of your mind and the sensitivity of your heart! Very inspiring and tender, dear Eileen!
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 12:57 PM
Thank you, my dear poet. Mou lipis poly. Kalos erthes. :) I'm so glad to see you back. I have taken a bit of a break. Thank you for your lovely visit. Filakia....H Mykrouli.
Seal Avatar
July 17, 2015 at 6:03 PM
Well, there's nothing obscure about you now is there my little Desert Orchid, I think this piece says it for many out there. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 12:58 PM
Thank you, Richard, for visiting my work. I hope to see a new one from you soon.
Lindley Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 7:34 PM
This is a solid gold piece my friend. A gem that inspires and holds the reader to want more each stanza! A7
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:00 PM
Thanks so much for the visit, Robert. I'm so sorry I haven't been around lately. I've been fighting a bit of depression. I will be by to see you soon, my dear. God bless.
Eastman Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 1:54 PM
With so many believing in that make believe land... I don't think it's so make believe any more... Becoming more solid by the moment... Did you see PS sent 'Poems by Eileen Manassian out to us all. Congrats! Does that make you feel famous? I think it should. It's sooo Cooolll!
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Carol, you are so sweet to visit my work and congratulate me. :) Bless your dear heart. I've been a bit emotionally unwell lately. Couldn't be on here. I'm better now. Hope to catch up. Hugs...kisses to DRAGON!
Nance Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:16 PM
Wow, this was really good! We use the poetry to create this world to escape into, I can relate to every word ;-)
Manassian Avatar
July 19, 2015 at 1:02 PM
Thanks for your visit, Dear. We all have escape mechanisms. I shouldn't complain. I have a very good life, but...as with reading...in writing, we free ourselves to explore other words and other life experiences. Thanks for the visit.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:07 AM
I might do the same thing. Take care Eileen.
Manassian Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:51 AM
No need for you to, Richard. You are riding wave after wave, my dear. I will always read and post on your comments....I will be back soon. Hugs
Horsman Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 5:15 AM
What can i say, that as not already been said, Eileen, yes i'm late as usual, but does not diminish my respect for you or your wonderful poetry..this as all your poems is both awesome and inspiring, you may feel down, but don't, your words bring so much to so many, not all of us, are as active as we would like, but i have a memory a good memory, in which your poetry lingers and bares fruit every time i think of you......
Manassian Avatar
July 15, 2015 at 8:52 AM
Thanks, dear Harry. What can I say. This place has its joys and sorrows too. We take what comes our way. Sometimes we need a time out for a while to refocus. I always love it when you visit. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 8:35 AM
I really enjoyed reading Richard Seal's dedication to you. Have a great day Eileen.
Manassian Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:20 PM
That was a lovely poem. Obviously his second best of all his poetry here on the site. That is why it was chosen to be featured according to the number of views. Didn't get a comment except yours, Richard. Sweet of you to visit that poem and leave a comment there and here. I'm taking a bit of a break from here, dear. I wanted you to know. I will always visit what you post and comment. That I promise. Hugs
Muideen Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Lol!!! A fabulous write here, enjoyed as always excellent......7!... Love...A.M.
Manassian Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:21 PM
Thank you for the visit, Afolabi. Very kind of you
Wigley Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 11:33 PM
By the very act of necromancing your youth, you are in fact keeping yourself young, Eileen. happy sixteenth birthday to you. Viv x
Manassian Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:23 PM
Necromancing...what an intriguing term, Viv. Thanks for the visit....and for the lovely compliment.
Leiser Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 1:37 PM
Yes, writing poetry can be a nice escape from the realities of life, and your imagination soars, Eileen :) Great write!
Manassian Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Thanks, Laura, dear. I'm not soaring at the moment. I'm cocooning. Not in a good place, but I hope to visit when I'm better. Hugs
Thomas Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 1:25 PM
I know this feeling very well too...creating our own dream land in which everything goes the way we want it too....such a beautiful world... A really nice, relatable write... :) Thank you for the visit and comment.
Manassian Avatar
July 14, 2015 at 10:31 PM
Thanks, Angie, for stopping by. I do appreciate your visit and kind words.
Horn Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:50 PM
Eileen, Reminds me of some Bateman poems I was just reading. I complimented him on his expression of peace and calmness just like I am also doing you right now. Jim Horn
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:54 PM
Thanks ever so much, James. There is enough tumult in the world around us. Sometimes, it's good to just....be. Hugs
Bocsa Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:50 PM
I liked especially...”She creates the most perfect place/Where love never dies or betrays.” Actually, both imagery and veses are wonderful.Congrat.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 12:52 PM
Thanks, dear. This is an older write. I sometimes repost to see if I get more viewers now that I'm better know or if people see a change in my writing style...perhaps more maturity. I appreciate your visit, Ovidiu.
Tate Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 5:38 PM
Eileen, very well written, I like the rhythm and rhymes. You are dedicated, for sure.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Thank you, James. I'm sorry I haven't been able to respond sooner. I'm not feeling well. I will try to visit when I'm better.
Meade Avatar
July 12, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Plumbing the depths of our souls, we begin to dissipate the noise and clamor of our the world to the peacefulness of the night -- where upon the wind, words written gently whisper -- I love you, oh my soul. LO, you have indeed travelled far . . . but the adventure is just beginning!! 7
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Thank you, David. You are very good to me. I'm not sure about that continuing journey at the moment. I'm emotional unwell. It will take some time. Thanks for the visit, though. You are always kind. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 7:10 AM
This has a fairy tale quality and easily stands the test of time. It is a wonderful celebration of poetry. Yes though, you have indeed come a long way, you have grown into your loviness.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, Richard. It is a sweet comment. I need that today. Very discouraged. Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 9:24 PM
It may be an oldie, but it shows that initial poetic grace within you. I have many oldies that I look back on and still treasure though I think to myself, I've come a long way! Anyway, I think this is so sweet with yearnings!
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thanks, Dear Andrea. Always good to hear from you. Hugs
J.T. Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Wow. I really like this one. This is going into my favs. Well done. Btw, I think we should collab again -JT
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Hit me up, JT. I will always collab with you dear. My internet is come and go at the moment, but....send me an email and I'll see what I can do. Hugs.
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 8:33 PM
This is where many of us thrive, where life becomes bearable, dreams and fantasies get us through the hard times.
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Yes, it sure seems so. Thank you for the post, Tim. You lift my spirits. Hugs
Chircop Avatar
July 10, 2015 at 4:52 PM
A beautiful and positive poem. I do share this kind of dream land Eileen , I so can relate to this, and it feels so great when Im in it. Lovely !
Manassian Avatar
July 13, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Thanks, sweetie. I know you can relate. Poetry is a beautiful gift to us. Hugs
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