The Oasis

The scorching soil seemed seamless
For the drooping-headed ones
Tongues tell the tales
The thirsty throats fail to utter:
Spotted, sored, nightmarish
Gazing at the slowly sliding soil
Stars of the faces are dimmed,
Lighting no more the darkening dreams
Feeding no more the wearying wings
Yet the oasis lies near

Its beckoning shimmer heave
Behind the mist of frustration
Its whispering waves die
At the gate to the fallen flags
That hang from the drooping heads

If only…
The stars could shine
The flags could rise,
But the oasis never quietens
As long as the heart beats,
The oasis never quietens
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 29, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Hope to see a new one from you again, Akudo...skat
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April 29, 2016 at 5:43 AM
Welcome to poetry soup... I enjoyed devouring your poem... great write.....
Ekeh Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 5:32 AM
Thanks all for the great comments. I appreciate!
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April 25, 2016 at 10:16 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Akudo. :)
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April 29, 2016 at 5:33 AM
thanks a lot, Moon Flower
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April 25, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Akudo, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Ekeh Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 5:34 AM
thanks
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April 25, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Akudo, Nice first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs
Ekeh Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 5:34 AM
thanks
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April 25, 2016 at 4:07 AM
Ps...the words unsupported Code, is showing under the title. Have a nice day, Linda
Ekeh Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 5:36 AM
thanks
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April 25, 2016 at 4:05 AM
Akudo, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@,
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